research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may havein our life.

which do you consider to be the major influence?

today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily influenced by the genetic sciences. we now understand the importance to inherited characteristics more than ever before. yet we are still unable to decide whether an individual's personality and development are more influenced by genetic factors (nature) or by the environment (nurture).

research, relating to identical twins, has highlighted how significant inherited characteristics can be for an individual's life. but whether these characteristics are able to develop within the personality of an individual surely depends on whether the circumstances allow such a development. it seems that the experiences we have in life are so unpredictable and so powerful, that they can boost or over-ride other influences, and there seems to be plenty of research finding s to confirm this.

my own view is that there is no one major influence in a person's life. instead, the traits we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences that we encounter in life are constantly interacting. it is the interaction of the two that shapes a person's personality and dictates ow that personality develops. if this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behavior and character of a person form the moment they were born.

in conclusion, i do not think that either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerful effects. how these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person's life.

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研究表明，与生俱来的经历相比，我们天生的特征对人格和发展的影响更大。

您认为哪个因素最重要？

今天，我们考虑人类心理学和心理发展的方式已受到基因科学的严重影响。现在，我们比以往任何时候都更了解继承特性的重要性。但是，我们仍然无法确定一个人的个性和发展是否受到遗传因素（自然）或环境（营养）的更大影响。

有关同卵双胞胎的研究强调了个人一生的显着遗传特征。但是，这些特征是否能够在个人的个性中发展取决于环境是否允许这种发展。似乎我们生活中的经历是如此的不可预测且如此强大，以至于它们可以促进或超越其他影响，并且似乎有大量研究发现可以证实这一点。

我个人的观点是，一个人的生活没有重大影响。相反，我们从父母那里继承的特质以及我们在生活中遇到的情况和经历不断地相互作用。两者的相互作用决定了一个人的个性，并决定了个性的发展。如果这不是真的，那么我们将能够从一个人出生的那一刻起就对其行为和性格进行预测。

总之，我不认为自然或养育对人的影响最大，但两者都有强大的作用。这些因素如何相互作用，今天仍然未知，它们在人们的生活中仍然难以预测。

20240320雅思作文篇2

the most prominent memory of my trip to europe in 1983 was not the excitement of traveling abroad for the first time but the discomfort of flying in a smoke-filled airplane for almost six hours. even in the non-smoking section, i was coughing and choking during the entire flight. and whenever i had to use the restroom, i had to hold my nose as i passed through the smoking area to the lavatory.

if i ruled the world, i would certainly outlaw cigarette smoking in all public places. fortunately for smokers everywhere, i don't rule the world. nevertheless, i fully support the idea behind the new york state legislature's recent bill to ban smoking in all restaurants in new york state.

according to the new york times, officials in both houses of the legislature say the legislation is "very close to fruition." california is the only other state i know that has banned smoking in restaurants and bars, and despite the predictions of some restaurant owners, i haven't read any reports that restaurant attendance has fallen off significantly since the bill passed. why should it? food is a necessity. people need to eat.

assigning designated smoking and non smoking areas in restaurants is not enough. smoke travels quickly beyond the imaginary boundaries set up between tables and booths. as a patron, i should be able to enjoy my meal without choking on someone else's smoke. the same is true in bars and nightclubs, although i would exercise more legislative restraint in this setting because dancing and drinking are not as essential as eating. still, why should i have to endanger my lungs just to go dancing?

i would ban smoking on public sidewalks and streets as well. what you do in the privacy of your own home is your business, but once you pollute the rest of the world with cancer-inducing toxic fumes, it becomes the government's business. i'm tired of asking people to put out their cigarettes or asking waiters to patrol the boundaries of their restaurant's smoking section. so if this new bill becomes law, as i hope it does, non-smokers will finally be able to enjoy their restaurant meals without having to police the artificial lines of separation that divide the two sections in restaurants.

20240320雅思作文篇3

1. 任务完成情况task response

主要包括三个方面：内容(content)是否切题，立场(position)是否鲜明并得到有效阐释，结构(structure)是否有逻辑性。

内容如何做到切题，关键在于审题时要找准题目的主题(topic)以及针对该主题所提出的问题(topic questions)。一般来说，主题就是题目中反复出现或主句中充当主语或宾语的名词以及名词短语，而问句则通常就是我们要讨论的要点，如果要点理解有误或漏掉某个要点，则都属于没有切题。譬如：

with the increasing use of mobile phones, less people tend to write letters. some people believe that writing letters will disappear completely. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

这个题目当中writing letters出现的频率较高，且都在主句中出现，说明它就是我们要找的主题，如果你过多描述mobile phones给我们带来的好处就跑题了。另外，题目的写作任务也很清楚：do you agree that writing letters will disappear completely? 属于“支持或反对”类的题，必须明确表达你的立场，不能既同意又不同意，同时表达你同意或不同意的理由。

立场要做到鲜明并得到有效阐释需要有如下几个内容：topic sentence(主题句)，main ideas(论点)，supporting points(论据)。主题句通常放在文章的首段，开门见山地表明你的立场，主题句只能有一个。论点放在中间段的首句，让读者一目了然，论点应该有两个以上，否则论证就不充分;论据包括evidence(证据)、examples(例子)等，放在论点后面，每个论点都应该有论据作支撑，否则就会显得论据不足。

合理的文章结构通常由三大部分组成，即引言(introduction)、主体(body)和结论(conclusion)，写4-5段比较合理。introduction部分要涵盖主题、写作任务和主题句，主体则要包括足够的论点和论据，结论可以重申观点、提出建议或展望未来。在这里需要提醒大家一定要认真审题，许多考生在考试的时候没有看清题目要求，明明题目分析优缺点，有些同学却写成了同意与否的题目，整篇文章走题，如果走题，只能取得5分以下的分数。

2. 连贯与衔接

文章的连贯性主要体现在段落与段落之间，句子与句子之间。

段落之间的“启”、“承”、“转”、“合”可通过表顺序的过渡词完成，譬如：

表示开始：first of all, in the first place, at the very beginning, to begin with, currently, at present, for one thing等。

表示承接：besides, further more, in addition, moreover, what’s more, meanwhile, apart from, as well as, similarly, in the same way等。

表示转折：however, whereas, while, on the contrary, in contrast, on the other hand等。

表示结论：in conclusion, in brief, in short, to sum up, ultimately, overall等。

句子之间的逻辑关系也要通过一些逻辑连词来完成，譬如：

表示原因：because (of ), accordingly, due to, owing to, for this reason, since, as a result, as a consequence等。

表达观点：in my opinion, personally, from my viewpoint, it seems to me, it is clear to me that, as far as i am concerned

举例说明：for example, for instance, as follows, such as, that is to say, namely, just as, in particular等。

表示让步：although, in spite of, despite of, despite the fact that, regardless of等。

建议大家可以在平日的练习中多多使用这些连词造句，不能只认识而不会使用，例如in spite of 和 despite这两个词后面只能跟短语而不能跟句子，这都是同学们在作文中常常犯的错误。

3. 词汇资源lexical resource

词汇的多少并不能决定文章的好坏，但用词的精准性是可以加分的。一般来说词汇的准确表达可以通过两个方面达到，一是在用词的难度上拔高，二是在近义词的多种表达上提升。譬如要描述一个好人，很多同学首先想到的形容词就是good, kind, wise, nice, clever, great, bright等词，而这些词往往很难出彩，因为描述太过于抽象，如果能用到诸如ambitious, tactful, eloquent, charismatic, committed之类的词就很具体了。

当然，这些词需要我们平时的日积月累，不是靠一两天的功夫就可以运用自如的。还有，值得提醒的是不要认为这些词好就过分堆积，会给考官留下华而不实的感觉，

雅思写作取得高分的关键在于灵活地运用词汇，多使用非常用词汇。因此，在日常学习中，如何区别低分词汇和高分词汇是关键所在。中国考生一般来说可以比较正确的表达出自己的观点，但是对于词汇和句式的使用就有些茫然了，经常会重复使用词汇，句式也只会用简单句。

举一个例子，英语中的‘我认为’有无数种说法，大多数中国考生只会用‘i think’ ，学术写作中的 ‘我认为’不能使用这个词组，i contend, from my point of view, as far as i am concerned, i argue, i assert…这些词汇都是学术英语中表示个人观点的高分词汇。

4. 语法的多样性和准确性 grammatical range and accuracy

句子的好坏主要取决于句子结构的准确性和丰富性，句子的长度和复杂性以及用语的.逻辑性和正式性。

句子结构的准确性涉及主谓一致、句子平衡性等问题，比如：the main reason for this use of informal languages are various and complicated. 这个句子不细心的同学很难发现它有问题，因为主语太长有时会忽视真正的主语其实是the main reason，是个单数形式，所以are 应该改为is. 再比如：in my opinion, use mobile phones to send messages is more convenient than write letters.

这是个很典型的错误，很多同学在写作的过程当中会误把动词或动词短语当主语用而造成句子结构的错误，而只有动词的非谓语形式才能在句中充当主语或宾语，因此，此句正确的表达应该是：in my opinion, using mobile phones to send messages is more convenient than writing letters.

句子结构的丰富性也是考官给分的一个亮点，好的段落应该由不同的句式组成，而不应该是千篇一律的句子结构。例如：i have many hobbies. for example, i like movies, i like playing basketball and football, and i like singing and dancing.

很明显，该句完全由“i + do”结构组成且like使用的频率过高，我们不妨做如下修改：i have many hobbies. movies, for example, are my favorite and i am also fond of playing basketball and football. sometimes when staying with my friends, i’d prefer singing and dancing rather than any other way of amusement.

句子的长度和难度是很多考生追求的目标，其实并不需要每个句子都写得很长很复杂，相反，如果整篇文章都是长难句，考官也会觉得很厌烦，就像一个人喜欢吃红烧肉，如果你天天给他吃红烧肉，他也会觉得很腻味一样，因此最好的方法就是长短句结合。

如何短句变长：即善用连接词and, but, or, yet, so等。例如：living off campus is exciting. living off campus is more independent. i prefer the convenience of living on campus. 不难看出，这是两种对立的观点，因此我们可以将其变为：living off campus is exciting and more independent, but i prefer the convenience of living on campus.

还有比较重要的一点是不容忽视的，即用语的正式性和严谨性。实际上，在汉语中也有很多这样的例子，比如我们说：“这里人真多啊!”这就是一个典型的口语化的表达方式，而如果用“人山人海”、“车水马龙”、“摩肩接踵”等词来形容人多就是写作语言了。

我们看几个非正式用语的句子：parents have to get kids food and other stuff. 此句中的kids和stuff就是两个非正式用语，如变成：parents have to provide children with food and other necessities.就正式了。

再如：people always say competitive sports are totally cool. 此句中的cool以及这个句式都是属于比较口语化的，应该变为：it is always said that competitive sports benefit us in several important ways.

1、雅思大作文写作需要注意写好文章框架

文章的framework即文章的结构永远是决定一篇写作是否达到要求的最重要的标准，寄一篇文章好不好，首先看的不是他的句型，词汇或者是论点等。而是段落之间的衔接一定要十分清楚，我们不能老师采用三大段的形式—开头，经过，结尾。我们可以多用用连接词，例如：first fo all,morever,secondly,lastly等，另外可以多分自然段，给考官一目了然的感觉。还有我们可以多看看国外的文章，看看他们的写作模式，这样写出来的雅思大作文才能更加贴近考官的标准。

2、雅思大作文写作技巧中，句型的多样化是非常重要的一个。

如果一篇文章，从头到尾，永远用的只有一种句型，纳闷这篇文章一定拿不到高分，我们可以适当的该换一下句型。

基本句型包括：1>主谓句2>there be 3>主表系结构的句子4>被动语态

复杂句型包括：1>并列句2>从句（定语，状语，名词性，非谓语）

3、词汇的variety是雅思大作文写作技巧中最基础的一个，也是最难掌握的一个。

说实话做到这点真的很难，首先你要有庞大的词汇量，第二你要用的恰当，不出错误。当然大家可以累计一些固定搭配的词汇，例如：激烈的竞争fierce competition等。

4、多举example雅思大作文写作技巧中的重要组成部分。

大家不要小看这一点，对于写作基础不是很好的考生来说，这点是最重要的。一篇文章如果让你从头到尾都是在讲道理，根本没有那么多话要说。而且有时候还不一定说的清楚。那么这时候那就用例子来表明你的观点。另外考官也是很欢迎考生在雅思大作文的写作中举例证明的，因为这样更具体。

20240320雅思作文篇4

environmental hazards are often too great for particular countries or individuals to tackle. we have arrived at a point in time where the only way to lessen environmental problems is at an international level.

environmental problems have reached such proportions that people feel international organizations must be set up to intervene in world affairs to resolve these problems. whether this will resolve the problem is very unlikely as international organizations are just an extension of human behavior. that is, if human conflicts cannot be resolved at home, then they are unlikely to be resolved at the international level. nevertheless, international organizations do attract attention to the growing problem of aims of the international community to resolve the issue of environmental pollution and support their cause, i do not believe it is the best or only way to protect the environment; in fact, it is only a small part of what is needed in a global initiative.

all world problems, whether it is environmental pollution, war, energy insufficiency, or famine, arise from the abusive behavior of all individuals. therefore, the solution to all these problems is the need for a collective consciousness. what is meant by this is that each individual must be aware of the impact he or she has on the world and their unique part to play in this world. after all, if one is happy with his life, he will surely not endeavor to harm the environment or anyone else. his behavior will be that of a responsible individual.

what is needed, therefore, is education. education is the key to all problems and it starts from pregnancy all the way to adulthood and beyond. furthermore, education means that children all over the world should be allowed to go to schools with good teachers and where teaching materials and methods can be adapted to each individual. education means raising children to be responsible individuals.

this may sound like utopia, but it is not: if a country had important problems in its educational system, then it should realize that it is contributing to the world's problems. these are perhaps long term solutions, but they are more realistic solutions than setting up yet another international organization.

20240320雅思作文篇5

1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...

该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。

2.the bar chart illustrates1 that...

该柱状图展示了...

3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding...

该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。

4.the diagram shows (that)...

该图向我们展示了...

5.the pie graph depicts2 (that)....

该圆形图揭示了...

6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of...

这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。

7.the figures/statistics show (that)...

数据(字)表明...

8.the tree diagram reveals how...

该树型图向我们揭示了如何...

9.the data/statistics show (that)...

该数据(字)可以这样理解...

10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...

这些数据资料令我们得出结论...

11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table...

如图所示...

12.according to the chart/figures...

根据这些表(数字)...

13.as is shown in the table...

如表格所示...

14.as can be seen from the diagram,great changes have taken place in...

从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。

15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that...

从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到...

16.this is a graph which illustrates...

这个图表向我们展示了...

17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to...

该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。

18.the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in...

该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。

19.this is a column chart showing...

这是个柱型图，描述了...

20.as can be seen from the graph,the two curves show the flutuation of...

如图所示，两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。

21.over the period from...to...the...remained level.

在...至...期间，...基本不变。

22.in the year between...and...

在...年到...期间...

23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...

1995年至1998三年里...

24.from then on/from this time onwards...

从那时起...

25.the number of...remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year).

...月(年)至...月(年)...的数量基本不变。

26.the number sharply went up to...

数字急剧上升至...

27.the percentage of...stayed the same between...and...

...至...期间...的比率维持不变。

28.the figures peaked at...in(month/year)

...的数目在...月(年)达到顶点，为...

29.the percentage remained steady at...

比率维持在...

30.the percentage of...is sightly larger/smaller than that of...

...的比例比...的比例略高(低)。

31.there is not a great deal of difference between...and...

...与...的区别不大。

32.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of...

该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。

33....decreased year by year while...increased steadily3.

...逐年减少，而...逐步上升。

34.the situation reached a peak(a high point at) of[%].

...的情况(局势)到达顶(高)点，为...百分点。

35.the figures/situation bottomed out in...

数字(情况)在...达到底部。

36.the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough.

数字(情况)达到底部(低谷)。

37.a is ...times as much/many as b.

a是b的...倍。

38.a increased by...

增长了...

39.a increased to...

增长到...

40.high/low/great/small/ percentage.

比低高(低)

41.there is an upward trend in the number of...

...数字呈上升趋势。

42.a considerable increase/decrease occurred from...to...

...到...发生急剧上升。

43.from...to...the rate of decrease slow down.

从...到...，下降速率减慢。

44.from this year on，there was a gradual declinel reduction in the...,reaching a figure of...

从这年起，...逐渐下降至...

45.be similar to...

与...相似

46.be the same as...

与...相同

47.there are a lot similarities/differences between...and...

...与...之间有许多相似(不同)之处

48.a has something in common with b

a于b有共同之处。

49.the difference between a and b lies in...

a与b之间的差别在于...

50...(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in...

...年...急剧上升。

一、图形种类及概述法：

泛指一份数据图表：a data graph/chart/diagram/illustration/table

饼图：pie chart

直方图或柱形图：bar chart / histogram

趋势曲线图：line chart / curve diagram

表格图：table

流程图或过程图：flow chart / sequence diagram

程序图：processing/procedures diagram

以下是一些较常用的描述用法

the table/chart diagram/graph shows (that)

according to the table/chart diagram/graph

as (is) shown in the table/chart diagram/graph

as can be seen from the table/chart/diagram/graph/figures,

figures/statistics shows (that)...

it can be seen from the figures/statistics

we can see from the figures/statistics

it is clear from the figures/statistics

it is apparent from the figures/statistics

table/chart/diagram/graph figures (that) ...

table/chart/diagram/graph shows/describes/illustrates how

二、data的具体表达法

data在某一个时间段固定不变：fixed in time

在一系列的时间段中转变：changes over time

持续变化的data在不同情况下:

增加：increase / raise / rise / go up ...

减少：decrease / grow down / drop / fall ...

波动：fluctuate / rebound2 / undulate / wave ...

稳定：remain stable / stabilize3 / level off ...

最常用的两种表达法：

动词 + 副词形式(verb+adverb form)

形容词 + 名词形式(adjective+noun form)

1. verb+adverb form

the number of xxx

+increase/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fall/fluctuate...

+insignificantly/significantly/slightly/suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/sharply/steeply/steadily/gradually/slowly...

+from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

2. adjective+noun form

there was a (very) sudden/rapid/dramatic/significant/sharp/steep/steady/gradual/slow/slight

+increase/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fall/fluctuation4 (注意：上述很多词不可用于修饰fluctuation)

+in the number of xxx from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

描述稳定的data：

the number of xxx remained steady/stable from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

the number of xxx stayed the same from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

there was little change / hardly any change / no change in the number of xxx from from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

描述不同状态的data

noun form:

steady drop / sharp rise peak / dramatic fall / sharp drop

verbal form:

(to) bottom out / (to) reach the bottom / (to) increase gradually / (to) reach a plateau / (to) remain steady

描述the highest point以及the lowest point

高点极值：

the monthly profit / the figures / the situation ...

+peaked in (月份/年) at xxx% / xxx(极点data)或者reached a peak / a high point at xxx% / xxx(极点data)

低点极值：

xxx bottomed out / reached

+rock / the bottom / a low point

或者hit a trough

此外，在描述过程中还有很多的conjunctional words/sentences，最常用的固定搭配如下：

并列： as well as(句首/中), also, as well(句尾), either, neither, too, moreover, furthermore, in addition, additionally, besides, what"s more, apart from ...

举例： for example, for instance, to illustrate1, as an illustration, in particular, particularly, especially

事实： as a matter of fact, in fact, actually, as long as, so long as ...

雷同/近似：similarly, likewise(句首/尾), at the same time, equally ...

转折： however, whereas, nevertheless, nonetheless, though, although, even though, while, yet, on the contrary, contrarily, in contrast, conversely, on the other hand, unlikely, in stead (of), in spite of, despite of ...

原因与结果

1. cause-suggestion (几乎不常用)

since / now that ...; i hope that...

because of/on account of/owing to/thanks to + (doing) sth, i hope that...

2. cause-effect (较常用)

xxx lead to / bring about / result in/ account for ...

(一个句子), therefore / thus / hence / as a result / consequently / (and) so ...

3. effect-cause (较常用)

xxx be caused by / result from / be the result of / be the effect of / be the consequence of ...

(一个句子), because ...

it is adj. that ...

it is unimaginable that ...

it is undeniable that ...

it is interesting to discover that ...

1. 主章开头

图表类型：table; chart; diagram; graph; column chart; pie graph

描述：show; describe; illustrate1; can be seen from; clear; apparent; reveal; represent

内容：figure; statistic2; number; percentage; proportion

2. 表示数据

一般：have 10%; at 10%; over 10%

最高(低)点：peaked; reached a peak / high point

bottomed out; reached the bottom

变化：recover 略有回升; increase; jump; rise/rose; climb

decrease; fall/fell; drop; decline; reduce

fluctuate 浮动，摇摆不定

remained steady/stable; stay the same; little/hardly any /no change

变化程度：sudden/suddenly 突然的，意外的

rapid/rapidly 迅速的，飞快的，险峻的

dramatic/dramatically 戏剧性的，生动的

significant/significantly 有意义的，重大的，重要的

sharp/sharply 锐利的，明显的，急剧的

steep/steeply 急剧升降的

steady/steadily 稳固的，坚定不移的

gradual/gradually 渐进的，逐渐的

slow/slowly 缓慢的，不活跃的

slight/slightly轻微的、略微地

stable/stably 稳定的

表示范围：from xxx to xxx; between xxx and xxx; for xxx to xxx多长时间直到

表示程度：almost adv. 几乎，差不多

nearly adv. 几乎，密切地

approximately adv. 近似的，大约

about adv. 附近，大约，转向，左右，周围

just over 刚超过

over adv. 结束，越过，从头到尾

exactly adv. 正确地，严密地

precisely3 adv. 正好精确地;清晰地

比例：20 per cent 20%

one in three 1/3

one out of every four 1/4

3. 其它在描述中的常用到的词

significant changes 图中一些较大变化

noticeable trend 明显趋势

during the same period 在同一时期

grow/grew 增长

distribute 分布，区别

unequally 不相等地

pronounced 明显的

average 平均

no doubt 无疑地

corresponding adj. 相应的，通讯的

represent vt. 阐述，表现

overall 总体上讲

except 除外

in the case of adv. 在...的情况下

in terms of / in respect of / regarding 在...方面

in contrast 相反，大不相同

in conclusion adv. 最后，总之

in comparison 相比之下

inversely4 adv. 相反地，倒转地

in general 通常，大体上，一般而??

range from

excessive adj. 过多的，过分的，额外

lower v.降低，跌落

elapse vi.(时间)过去，消逝

category n.种类

government policy 政府政策

market forces 市场规率

measure n. 尺寸，方法，措施 v.估量，调节

forecast n. 先见，预见 v. 预测

20240320雅思作文篇6

women seemed to be the least important creatures in the world in ancient times.at that time the criterion whether a woman is good or not is obedience. a woman was to be obedient to her parents in her youth, to her husband once she got married and to her children in her old age.at that time, women were subordinate to men, having no humanity at all, not to mention the so-called liberty or equality.

as time goes by,tremendous changes have happened to women＇s status, from women being permitted to receive education together with men to being able to go out to work in the society. nowadays, such cases are ordinary that women compete with men,work with men,and even take the leadership.wornen＇s status arrives at an unprecedented high level, which can be called as equality to some extent.

however, the situation is not so optimistic as the majority of women think. in effect, women are far from equal to men.actually, men＇s superiority is inveterate, which can＇t be shaken overnight. though the society keeps on saying women should be treated equally as men, the idea that men are better than women still exerts a subtle influence on people＇s minds. when opening newspapers, how many "only men are eligible" are there in advertisements for employees? that is the reality.people tend to value men, not women, at least subconsciously, men are superi

i don＇t think the concept is based on science. it can＇t be denied that men take a dominant position in strength, logical thinking etc., but there are characteristic advantages women have anyhow, in which men fail to contend with them. consequently,men are no better than women. policewomen, women pilots,and women astronauts.., all these will prove the ability women own to the public. as a result, women get more and more aware of their own values. despite its hardships and high costs, lots of

them are trying their best to change the prejudice of the society.

however, what i want to point out here is that not only men have the prejudice, but some women themselves do too. eyen those who claim to long for equality with men have the double standard of equality. on one hand, they demand equal opportunity; on the other hand, they take "lady first" for granted,considering that it is perfectly justified for men to open door for them, offer their own seats to them, pay for dinner for them.does it make sense? how can you ask others to treat you equally while you yourself have admitted the inequality in advance?

in short, i think as long as our sense doesn＇t completely change, the real equality between men and women won＇t come.

20240320雅思作文篇7

sport today is turning into a business, with many companies involved and ever growing prize money for the sportsmen. do you think it's a positive or negative development?

these days, with growing numbers of companies being involved and with the increase of prize for sportsmen, the traditional sports have been developed into a business. when some people doubt the change of the essence of sports, i, however, would claim this trend to be a positive development for the following reasons.

taking sports as a business increases people's attention and concern on sports, and thus can gain more benefits in the duration. to run the business more successfully, publicity of the sports will be conducted more vigorously, which will surely attract more people to take part in. in addition, this indicates that, as other economic activities, investment in sports can also generate profits, so that more money can be put into this field to promote its development.

this encourages more gifted people to participate in sports to develop it to a higher level. attracted by being the focus of so many people and encouraged by the high prize through winning in sports, more geniuses in this field can be stimulated to display their talent. also, to achieve the aim to realize their dreams in life, competitions for the winners will be fiercer, which helps to tap their potential to the most.

admittedly, being too commercialized in sports may, in the meanwhile, generate some problems and even deviate it from the essence to fortify people's health. however, it is the degree of control in the business, rather than the matter of taking it as a business itself. the principle of business in seeking profits will surely guide it to develop healthily to free us of the worries.

to sum up, developing sports as a business not only benefit more people but also develop sports itself. with a clear understanding of this and continual effort in the field, sports can bring us more benefits in the future.

翻译：

当下，随着越来越多的企业的参与，以及给予运动员奖金的增加，传统的体育活动已经演变成了一种商业活动。有人怀疑体育运动的实质的改变，然而，我认为这个趋势是积极的，原因如下。

把体育运动当作一项商业活动增强了体育活动的注意和关心，并因此能够在其中获得更多的利益。想要更加成功的做好这个事业，那么对于体育运动的宣传要做得有活力，这样就能吸引更多的人参与。此外，这也表明像其他经济活动一样，投资体育运动也能产生利润，所以会有更多的钱投资到这个领域来推动其发展。

这鼓励了更多有才能的人参与体育运动，将其发展到更高的水平。由于受到参与体育活动就能被众人所关注的吸引，并且受到赢得比赛就能获得高额奖金的鼓励，在这方面更多天才能被激励着去展现他们的才能。而且，运动员们为了完成能实现人生理想的目标，他们的额竞争将更加激烈，这可以帮助他们把潜能发挥到最大值。

不可否认，在体育运动被过度商业化的同时，可能会产生一些问题并且偏离其原本增强人们健康的本质。然而，这与掌控商业的程度有关，而与将其作为商业本身无关。商业上寻求利益的原则一定会引导其健康发展，使得我们免于担心。

总之，将体育活动变成一种商业活动不仅使得更多的人获利，而且也能是体育本身获得发展。对了这个有了清晰的了解并且在这方面继续努力，体育运动在未来将会给我们带来更多的利益。

20240320雅思作文篇8

雅思写作范文解析：

大作文思路解析：a搬去农村 b员工不用到市中心上班 c 解决了交通问题

a搬去农村 b员工在市郊购买房子c 解决了住房问题

a搬去农村 b 农村没有相应的设施 c 很多人还是选择住在城市，问题没有解决

这个题目确定a和c。a是将公司工厂和员工移到农村，而c是大城市的交通和住房问题。如果反对的话，你可以说这个政策解决不了交通和住房的问题。也可以说其他方法才可以解决(虽然这样写不够直接，其他方法可以解决，不代表这个方法不行。)任何观点关于“将公司工厂和员工移到农村”的好坏处不和住房交通有关，都是跑题。譬如说环境、公司成本等等。

小作文思路解析：该线性题目描述了4个发达国家在过去200年间人均身高的变化。很明显总体趋势都是上升，并且在第一个世纪除了持续波动，身高变化不大。在之后一百年，都是显著上升趋势。既然总体趋势相似，重点应放在国家之间的对比。范文共计9句话。

雅思大作文范文1：小站版

范文节选：however, depopulation is not the ultimate solution to overcrowding in urban areas; new problems may arise. firstly, the need for public-sector dwellings is not eliminated. with the number of migrants to cities constantly increasing, the vacated places are quickly inhabited by newcomers, so that the government has to develop more land to build houses. moreover, evicting people does not cut the demand for quality resources such as education, medical care, and infrastructure, which are clustered in city centres. if rural areas are incapable of satisfying those needs, some people may still choose to travel back to their urban homes, thereby creating more traffic flow on the limited road space. furthermore, simply shifting buildings to regional areas does not weaken vehicle dependency, as long as accessible public transit and industry cluster are not developed. since companies are further from their clients, providers and other contractors, greater traffic volumes are still likely to be induced by transporting raw materials, delivering goods and services, and travelling on business.

雅思大作文范文2：雅思哥版

范文节选：there is no doubt that the dense population and limited land resources are responsible for housing shortage in major cities, while the rural area is sparsely populated with sufficient land supply. if some companies, factories and their employees moved out of town, there would be more vacant buildings to meet the demand of city dwellers. besides, with fewer people travelling to and from work inside the city, traffic is expected to be reduced and pressure on the public transportation system eased.

雅思大作文范文3：唐老雅版

范文节选： on the one hand, most big cities are suffering from large population and limited resources. if big companies and factories, together with their huge number of employees, move to the countryside, there will be fewer people living in the city, then with the housing pressure reduced, the housing prices will surely go down. meanwhile, the urban traffic will also improve because the number of commuters to and from work every day is now smaller. on the other hand, businesses moving to rural area will stimulate the consumption and facilitate infrastructure in this area apart from offering employment opportunities to the local people.

雅思小作文范文：小站版

范文节选：initially, americans ranked the top, with an average height of approximately 168 cm which was immediately followed by british (166cm) while people from denmark and france were slightly higher than 160 cm.

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